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At first I wasn't sure I liked it, but when I read the last line, it made the whole thing. The only line I think you really need to change ...

Can you post more than one contest at a time?

Thanks for your comment! Good suggestions.

So, take me to that place Where the grass is green as youth And the rhythm of a seashell, is perfect as a breath Where the river sings as freely, ...

Only one suggestion: Change the title. Only one description: Beautiful. Great images. Great wording. Great feel. Great job.

Bravo! I absolutely love the rhythm! It changes in parts, so it doesn't get boring but it still flows nicely. I also like the way you tied the beginning in ...

I liked this! Your rhyming was good and it didn't sound forced, which is hard to do. My favorite lines were: Words are forgotten, and dreams are shed. But sugar ...

Hi again Ana. I really like this. Pablo was a good dog. I miss him too. I'm sure he would be very happy if he heard this poem! :) The ...

Everyone- Thanks for the comments, sorry if it was a little confusing. Maybe I should have made it more clear, I'll try some changes, thanks for all your help! Ana- ...

Hi Ana! Its me. I really liked this! I didn't find any grammar errors or punctuation errors or anything. And the story was really good to. It sounds like its ...

Chapter 4 …Again “And so it was that she did not see the man reappear inside the yard….” The door let out a small creak of protest as it was ...

Thanks for the comments everyone! Perhaps I will add more...

Thanks! This helps a lot!

Its been a while, sorry it took so long! The last chapter wasn't very good, I hope this one is a little better! Please review! Chapter 3: Strange Goings On ...

Its been a while, sorry it took so long! The last chapter wasn't very good, I hope this one is a little better! Please review! Chapter 3: Strange Goings On ...